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Update on that F13 fan-game

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I know I said I wasn't even going to begin on the Jason campaign until the Counselor one was 100% finished, but I'm putting the cutscene of Alice killing Pamela up so I can get feedback on it, since its literally the first thing seen on Jason's campaign. I never saw an actual boat-ramp in the movies, but decided to add one anyway, so let me know if it seems too out of place.

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Besides Pamela's placeholder appearance, I think the dialogue needs some work. But at the same time Friday the 13th isn't known for great dialogue...

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On 12/20/2021 at 5:12 PM, MyersVoorhees said:

Besides Pamela's placeholder appearance, I think the dialogue needs some work. But at the same time Friday the 13th isn't known for great dialogue...

Ok, what would you suggest?

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6 hours ago, HaHaTrumpWon said:

Ok, what would you suggest?

I feel like some of it is too on the nose. What I'd suggest is making the dialogue more compact/shorter, that's the easiest way to fix it.

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