HaHaTrumpWon 1,229 Posted December 16, 2021 I know I said I wasn't even going to begin on the Jason campaign until the Counselor one was 100% finished, but I'm putting the cutscene of Alice killing Pamela up so I can get feedback on it, since its literally the first thing seen on Jason's campaign. I never saw an actual boat-ramp in the movies, but decided to add one anyway, so let me know if it seems too out of place. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jason Todd Voorhees 767 Posted December 18, 2021 Thanks for the update! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MyersVoorhees 57 Posted December 20, 2021 Besides Pamela's placeholder appearance, I think the dialogue needs some work. But at the same time Friday the 13th isn't known for great dialogue... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
HaHaTrumpWon 1,229 Posted December 24, 2021 On 12/20/2021 at 5:12 PM, MyersVoorhees said: Besides Pamela's placeholder appearance, I think the dialogue needs some work. But at the same time Friday the 13th isn't known for great dialogue... Ok, what would you suggest? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Fair Play 5,632 Posted December 24, 2021 Good to know the project is still a work in progress. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MyersVoorhees 57 Posted December 24, 2021 6 hours ago, HaHaTrumpWon said: Ok, what would you suggest? I feel like some of it is too on the nose. What I'd suggest is making the dialogue more compact/shorter, that's the easiest way to fix it. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
